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ultra
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptySun Jun 02, 2013 8:36 pm

Maxx Toron wrote:
Ultra, dude, you never edited it.


Lone, why not post with Johnny and Sylvia while ultra underps?
I unexpectedly had to leave after I posted that. Doing the edit now.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptySun Jun 02, 2013 9:04 pm

That's it? You don't write "Edit" when you do that firstly. Would you see that in a book? Secondly, one line isn't sufficient. Actually write something, please.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptySun Jun 02, 2013 9:42 pm

Jake and Gabe




Jake:






Gabriela:


Last edited by Mr Allen J on Sun Jul 28, 2013 1:26 am; edited 4 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptySun Jun 02, 2013 11:42 pm

I might be joining this, but first I want to catch up and read everything that's been posted so far. May take a bit...
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 12:01 am

Lone, can you please post?
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 12:19 am

I will post. Just give me a minute to kick back...
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 12:25 am




Okay, kickback's over. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 1:48 am

Maxx Toron wrote:
That's it? You don't write "Edit" when you do that firstly. Would you see that in a book? Secondly, one line isn't sufficient. Actually write something, please.
I really don't have the time to do what you are asking. This is the best you are getting for the time being.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 2:04 am

FlowerFox wrote:
I might be joining this, but first I want to catch up and read everything that's been posted so far. May take a bit...


Sorry that I missed your post. It would be great if you joined. If you have any questions, I'll answer.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 2:56 am

^

I can vouce for that.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 2:57 am

TheOperator wrote:
^

I can vouce for that.


Is a voice something like a vampire mouse?


EDIT: I do hope I got the drama queen bit of Carole's personality under my belt in that last post. I made it overly melodramatic to the point where I was actually feeling sick.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 3:58 am

Melodrama can sometimes be for comical effect. In which case it's ridiculously funny, especially to me, since I like funny situations. I wonder if everyone remembers my Telepath pelting intruders with thumbtacks?
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 2:44 pm

Hey if anyone needs to use my any characters while I'm gone, just PM me about it or ask here in the OOC thread. I'm cool with it, just wanna know whaat's going on with em...
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 6:47 pm

Changed a few things about the last post. Added more dept to Jake's point of view and added Drake's.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 9:31 pm

Claire is mad. Just so y'all know, that's a regular for her. She's usually an obnoxious fill-in-the-blank. She's not supposed to be a very likable person, though she's not completely unbearable because she throws a lot of parties and such. It's kind of a pathetic existence if you think about it, as well as another Gatsby reference.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyMon Jun 03, 2013 9:44 pm

I think Drake has started a sort of rivalry with Nicole by this point.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyTue Jun 04, 2013 12:50 am

I have decided that if I work my butt off this week and finish my current stuff ill jump back in. im about a quarter done with it, so that shouldn't be too hard. unless I keep falling asleep that is.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyTue Jun 04, 2013 1:14 am

Forgive me, Lone, but Johnny seems like he's just a little bit afraid of Claire right now. Just my observation.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyTue Jun 04, 2013 1:16 am

Not afraid. Annoyed.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyTue Jun 04, 2013 2:25 am

Now everyone's annoyed.


Anyways, TJ is heading over to the detention center after a touching scene, if I do say so myself. Perhaps he can bump into Jake and Johnny and help them find Gabe?
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyTue Jun 04, 2013 2:33 am

I guess Marie is going to have found the library by this point. If anyone wants to run into Tom, he's probably in the lunchroom.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyTue Jun 04, 2013 2:49 am

John offered to hel her. I am now frozen because you never responded.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyTue Jun 04, 2013 2:50 am

ultra wrote:
I am now frozen because you never responded.


You put me and Maxx in the same position...
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyTue Jun 04, 2013 2:51 am

New Supplice wrote:
ultra wrote:
I am now frozen because you never responded.


You put me and Maxx in the same position...


Pretty much. Ultra, Vipes said that Marie slipped away when nobody was looking. That is a response.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 20 EmptyTue Jun 04, 2013 3:05 am

If you don't post responses fast enough, ultra, I'll move my characters out of IC locks.
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