Once in Light

K. Thanks for understanding. I might not get in a post till Monday though. I'll get one up when I can

Humor is always good. And for your information she would smell like a rabbit. You'd have to use true seeing magic to notice otherwise. Also it seems strange that the first thing you would do is is question whether a giant rabbit is really a giant rabbit... I do agree sniffing it would be the natural reaction for your character though.

Haha, I don't care what Kader thinks.

gosh dang the same thing happend again *sigh* for unessa ill get up soon then ill post

Would you care to perhaps listen to the GM, along with using punctuation and capitalization?
I asked for more detail on your char sheet, and I'm fairly sure making a second one is not the same as adding detail to the original.

no i was im still gonna fix his i guess but i was planning on makeing a second char from the start anyway i just happened to lose it again which makes me very sad

as far as proper grammer ill do my best.

Whoop woop morning guys. I'll be posting later :3

also i edited my CS

I keep telling you Wolf if you want to be taken seriously as an RPer you need to use Grammar and spelling properly.

Also I might be able to squeeze in a post today, but It depends on my nephew showing up.

And once again, I asked for more detail. All I see now are a few capital letters, which is clearly more than the zero that existed before. But still, this happens to be my rp, which means it would be nice if you actually paid attention to what I say.

Also yes Stalker it would be awesome if you could post today.

Well My nephew showed up.... So It depends if he want's me to play COD with him or not.

Uhh I did I never payed much attention in english in high school so im srry if i cant use proper grammer correctly i was force passed in highschool for jinkies sake and im probly not gonna learn anytime soon in OA unless you could tutor me but your always busy doing other stuffs so i dout thats gonna happen either jeez! Also i suck with desciption which happens to be my mian weakness as a writer so my bad ill try working on more details and i msrry i didnt catch that detail about details.

I have yet to pay much attention either.
Say what you want to type out loud, then type that exactly down. Put commas where you paused in your speech.

I haven't met anyone older than five who spoke out loud with obviously improper grammar.

well what exactly is the point of grammer if everyone knows exactly what were saying and can form a responce even though i probly had bad grammer this whole time you still get what im saying right?

It makes a person seem more literate and it's easier to read.

The point is it's much more fun to read something that makes sense right off the bat.  We're here to rp, which is a form of writing.  Books that are painful to read never get published.

While I don't expect people to write as well as published authors, I do expect them to at least try.

"Kirin smiled and her mane looked like it was glowing then runs off"

Vs

"The young kirin stood proudly in the sun, her pale mane blowing in the wind.  The sun cast a light through her mane, making it look almost as if she was glowing.  She smiled mischeviously, a light sparkling in her teal eyes, before turning and galloping into the distance, leaving only dust and wind in her wake."

Which is more fun to read?
It's not a question of getting the point.  It's a question of truly seeing what the other person is trying to portray.  Writing is an art, and beyond that it's very simply a skill.  Both of those things do require effort, but in the end, isn't it worth it?
I think so.

As do I. Even thought suck at it somw. And COD

i guess your wright but still i need help with my descripton skills and grammar

Hey stalker your gonna have to give me grammar lessons sometime

Alright. In that case start with capitalization and punctuation. You've already shown you can do it.

For that particular post, three things. Names, along with "I" should be capitalized. Wright is a name- right. And your means "belongs to you" while you're means "you are"
the ' is where two words have been stuck together.

Hope that helps :3

lol stuff i knew but thanks for the effort. I guess I'm better with grammar when I'm actualy trying.

Still working on my character sheet... Dang, why is this taking so long.

I am VERY distracted and sidetracked. I should be getting it up today though.

Ah well.  That's one thing, if you don't do it, people can't tell if you actually can.
Unless they've known you for a while of course.

Either way, I'm trying to help right?  XD


Gliiicttt
How close are you to done?

I'm on items. :3

Oh ya. Angel, could you post on The Return?

Oh yeah one second :3

And I am waiting for the van to come get me and take me back to the middle of nowhere.

Rightnow I'm at the Pickup spot. Bumming the Internet from The Days inn two biulding over.