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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:10 am

Yeah, I get it. I honestly think that its a bad idea to have no way whatsoever for new students to come without having already survived an attack that they weren't actually present in. I'll redo my post.

I'm in the process of reading the op but I don't have much time, and time is money. So what's happened so far? I know about the Op with the battles before and all the dead people and stuff.



EDIT: Okay, I see now. So how should I introduce my characters? I mean, I don't want them starting injured because that's honestly really stupid. I can easily say that TJ's been hiding in the tower, but CLaire will be a problem, as if she was in a fight you'd know it by the thunder claps.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:14 am

You could say they got knocked out and someone saved them before they could be injured or get taken prisoner.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:16 am

Read that post I made that says Students
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:16 am

Okay, I got it. Claire got shot and TJ used his portal powers to shoot himself and her to safety.


Also Lone, since I can't do the time travel, can I change TJ's weakness to allow him to take one person with him through the portals?


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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:33 am

Sure
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:36 am

Okay. Claire's in the tower and TJ is now walking around the dorms, looking for anyone who survived. Feel free to interact with him as soon as I check for typoes.



EDIT: Post is up.





Anyways, I'm gonna work on a third character. Not sure about powers though. Might do something cerebral.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 12:36 pm

Alright. I effectively retconned both Douglas and David since I didn't like them too much. So, I'm going to make a new group of characters to replace them. I also changed Lily's power up a bit.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 2:31 pm

Okay, then. I actually don't recall Douglas and David, to be honest.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 2:55 pm

Post's up.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:12 pm

I posted a reply. This is about to get interesting...
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:24 pm

I'll have Dragonfly overhear and then stalk Nicole and Drake to find the source (If those are the right people, still learning everyone's names).

Out of curiosity, I made a comments that people have spread rumors about Dragonfly's mental issues saying he is completely insane (Which is wrong, it's only half the time), do you think they should know about that?

It's up to you, really. But knowing would influence their reactions to seeing him when he lets his camo down (It's like his power, he can't overuse it).
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:32 pm

Well, Sandy and my other character are both loners, they usually avoid people. They would probably ignore gossip, and even possibly frown upon people who do it. They might be intimidated by Dragonfly's appearance, but I doubt that they would know his mental issues.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:50 pm

Johnny and Sylvia


Johnny:




Sylvia:


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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:04 pm

Vipera, was the "sometimes invisible" bit about TJ getting into the lounge without going through the door?
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:10 pm

No, there's a guy among the new arrivals who can turn invisible. Marie is a bit of a child genius, she figures stuff out pretty fast. She doesn't know who TJ is.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:14 pm

So she's not talking to TJ? I'm confused. You said a dollar in his hand, and blood-covered clothes, so I assumed it to be TJ.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:42 pm

There's a third person in Marie was talking to. Nicole was also talking to someone else before Drake came along, so there's three people in that group, too.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 5:51 pm

Are you talking about TJ or john Vipera? TJ introduced himself.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 6:11 pm

Sorry, there's a lot of confusion, Maxx.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 6:36 pm

Yes, yes there is. We need ultra to post.


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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 6:40 pm

Mehah, that was a good way to put it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 6:41 pm

Okay, TJ introduced himself. Everyone in that convo now refer to him as TJ. Now we only have one person who nobody knows who he is.


Btw, does anyone know where I got TJ's name from?
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 6:50 pm

Not really...
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 18 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 7:52 pm

The Great Gatsby. The eyes of Dr.TJ Eckleburg are on a billboard for an optometrist and overlook this dirty, dusty area of New York that is known as the Valley of Ashes. At the end, the eyes are referred to as the eyes of God by the mentally unstable Wilson. Basically, the eyes stare across this urban Hell, watching the terror that is unfolding.
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