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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 12:56 am

Sure, where is Marie?
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 1:13 am

Wandering around the hallways somewhere. With permission from people first, she will likely appear around characters seemingly out of the blue. She's that weird, creepy girl that always seems to vanish and appear without anyone ever knowing when she showed up or left.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 1:21 am

I'd like it if we have an discussion about if we'll have an antagonist or a traitor plot during the course of the RP. This will really dictate which direction I take the RP in after--- Well, the current plot.

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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 1:46 am

Well, I seldom like my characters being traitors unless I intended for it to happen when I made them. I can make some sort of mentally twisted person, but there's a point where my characters can be so dangerous just because of the way they think it might not be ideal. I could probably make a person that's a really good actor, and capable of concealing their real intentions, but then that's a psychopath and something like what you'd see from an episode of Hannibal.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 1:49 am

More than likely the traitor would be one of my characters. Unless someone else wants to have the traitor. And, I intend on keeping it really subtle. Like anyone could be the traitor.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 1:53 am

Yeah...being subtle isn't my best skill.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 1:56 am

I'll handle it, then. So, does that mean you're in with the traitor plot?
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 2:03 am

Traitors are more interesting, more backstory and all.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 2:59 am

New Supplice wrote:
As the OP said, time travel is immediately out of the question. Both sheets are accepted.


Wait, so if time travel is against the rules, is TJ accepted? You have confused me.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:08 am

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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:19 am

Indeed...
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:33 am

What im saying is that I want you to cut the time travel.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:35 am

Oh ok. Gotcha.


Anyways, I made my first post. A little short, but I'm out of practice. I believe it's relatively well-written though. TJ is looking for anyone who feels like talking to him.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:43 am

The school isn't really much of a single building, Maxx. It's more like a bunch of complexes trapped under a huge dome, which I think is supposed to be invisible until you reach the edge of it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:44 am

Um Maxx. No new characters are going to be introduced that way. They have to be students that survived the attack.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:48 am

What attack? And when was someone going to tell me about this? I didn't see anything in the OP about an attack.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:53 am

Maxx, Lone did describe the school's current state in the OP, and one of his previous posts in the IC talks about the attack.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:56 am

I am aware. However I did not know that whoever these people are couldn't put new metas there.


So what you're telling me is that my character has to automatically know everyone and needs to have survived an attack? Well where's the fun!? I might as well not introduce them!
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 3:59 am

The person in charge is missing, the arrivals at the beginning of the RP was the last group. Now anyone new has been at the school and simply survived whatever attack happened. My own characters are both sort of loners, and they're really good at hiding, so they aren't in the hospital, but your characters might be a different story. Lone has a guy in the hospital currently.

Maxx, your characters do not have to know everyone. I've gone to school and had zero contact with people.
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:01 am

Maxx... Have you even read the OP.....?
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:02 am

The majority of it. Though now it seems as if I missed a section...


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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:03 am

It feels like you didn't read the entire thing, and only skimmed over it, not really taking in the information.


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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:03 am

I know it's your style lone, but these spoiler tabs are really annoying. it's realyl easy to think you opened one, but didn't.


Yeah, i get the premise. Kids in abandoned school for superpowers, don't know what the hell is going on. Have no historical background with the school adn now some mysterious madmen are coming after them. I expected as much. However I missed the tab labeled "othergrounds", so excuse me while I go read it.


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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:04 am

quote the post, that's how I read spoiler tabs
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PostSubject: Re: The Othergrounds - Trimmed   The Othergrounds - Trimmed - Page 17 EmptySat Jun 01, 2013 4:08 am

New characters would have to be former students because there'd be no way to introduce new characters.....
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