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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyTue Feb 25, 2014 5:05 am

Alright, I didn't have enough time to post between my Karate classes, and other etc, so I'll do it tomorrow.

So, Maxx, if you're not going to post soon, I'll just get the ruins group moving.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyTue Feb 25, 2014 8:46 pm

YES


I've made my first post that was longer than it should have been.

The ruins group is officially in the ruins... I have to go, so I'll write up the rest of the POV's later.


On a side note; I'm going to start doing flashbacks to the very moment my characters discovered their powers.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyTue Feb 25, 2014 9:37 pm

Lol XDthe last part of the post....
"Strip club"
XD I just died of laughter
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyTue Feb 25, 2014 9:46 pm

Gabe is the best character.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyWed Feb 26, 2014 1:49 am

I've had a lot on my plate lately, should be able to post tomorrow.

Lieo, if you haven't edited your post by then I will do what you suggested.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyThu Feb 27, 2014 4:32 am

Me and Lone were chatting about it and I brought up the idea of ending the fight via timer. The fight is lasting too long, turning yourself into gas is going to stall it further, and we kind of just want to end it here without any stupid endings to the fight.

No winners, no draw, just no contest; I'm sure we've all played Super Smash Bros.

Open to any suggestions or whatnot, agree or no.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyThu Feb 27, 2014 4:35 am

I suggested that there be a timer in the chat room when there was the argument couple weeks back.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyThu Feb 27, 2014 4:46 am

I heavily agree with Lieo, I just want the fight to end already. I would do it next post, but I'll wait for Night's input.

And you did, Celo? Must have missed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyThu Feb 27, 2014 4:53 am

I think the timer is a good idea, I don't see any other quick end to it either. Between the gaseous form my characters are in and Abe going golem we'd be going for quite a while.

Yeah, she did suggest it a while back.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyThu Feb 27, 2014 5:02 am

Bollocks, I should have been more attentive.

Anyways, I'm going to end the fight next post, and finally have Drake do something else.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyThu Feb 27, 2014 5:05 am

I'll get a post in tomorrow.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyFri Feb 28, 2014 12:50 am

So at this point I'm not really holding anybody up, so I might wait a few days before posting in this again. If anything major happens that requires my immediately attention, pm me. I'm assuming the ruins subplot won't be over in a few days.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyFri Feb 28, 2014 1:52 am

I have some vague ideas for a really long-term subplot for Arianna

That is all
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyFri Feb 28, 2014 1:59 am

Let's create some strain on Arianna's and Jake's relationship!

*laughs maniacally*
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptyFri Feb 28, 2014 4:05 am

Lieo wrote:
Let's create some strain on Arianna's and Jake's relationship!

*laughs maniacally*


Yus. Let's do it, Shade.



Maxx wrote:
So at this point I'm not really holding anybody up, so I might wait a few days before posting in this again. If anything major happens that requires my immediately attention, pm me. I'm assuming the ruins subplot won't be over in a few days.


Well, something major IS about to happen. Though, it probably won't directly affect Eli and Areilla. And I estimate that the subplot is half done.


I'm half done a post.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptySat Mar 01, 2014 6:42 am

Hm... Night this is a trend that I've noticed with your characters is that they are utterly flawless, as in they have little to no flaws appearance/personality wise, or they have very unnoticeable flaws. The same goes for Eric. The thing that I have a problem with is that it's pretty much the basis for a pretty bland, boring, and one dimensional character. So, until you come up with some reasonable flaws, Eric is rejected.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptySat Mar 01, 2014 6:58 pm

Some of my sheets aren't that in depth either. I can see your point for some of the others (particularly Cassandra and Vance), but I'd argue that Eric was relatively well thought out in this regard. Could you please elaborate, because he does have flaws to both his appearance and personality that I think are rather prevalent.

I don't have problem with changing him, but I'm honestly not sure what I'm missing in this case.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptySat Mar 01, 2014 7:18 pm

If I may interject, let me argue that it appears you've already edited your post - three times, in fact - the last edit was made 7:20 AM this morning (my time), which is a good 6 hours after Lone made the post letting you know what he thought. Surely you must have saw Lone's post before you made those edits.

You didn't refer any mention to making those edits in your post, which acts as some cause for suspicion. Otherwise, I'd agree that Eric's sheet looks pretty good since those edits were made. A vast improvement if you ask me!
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No, that is not the idea. There is little difference between what I submitted and the edits I made following. In the absence of correspondence or feedback (Well Lone went to bed) I did make some additions to hopefully eliminate what he was talking about. At around the same as I made the third edit I sent a PM asking exactly what I needed to fix. I haven't gotten anything back so that's when I posted here.

Now I have made a forth edit and a very noticeable difference, and I'm hoping it's enough.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptySat Mar 01, 2014 7:56 pm

He's much better now that you've made some edits. He's accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptySat Mar 01, 2014 11:13 pm

Alright, sweet. I also went back and made the sheets for Cassandra, Vance, and Kate more dynamic.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptySun Mar 02, 2014 7:55 pm

Alright guys, we're one step closer to the timeskip. We'll be timeskipping eight days, so if there's any changes in relationship, then now's the time.
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Alright, so is Ray still at the room? I was planning on having Vance head back. Then there's something else about the time skip that I'll PM you about.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptySun Mar 02, 2014 8:05 pm

Ray's still there, Rush isn't.


And Shade, my post had Jake help Arianna back to the academy
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 27 EmptySun Mar 02, 2014 8:16 pm

I saw your post right after I was done and fixed it up.
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