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Mr Allen J Artist out of Work
Posts : 2321 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Tue Oct 29, 2013 8:36 pm | |
| Other character. I'll send you his power in a second. Name: Ray Judah DragerGender: Male Age: 20 Appearance: Ray is a neat looking individual, he also has that shady vibe. Like he's totally up to no good. He stands a bit above average (6'1') and weighs 182 pounds. Ray has a muscular build, nothing like a bodybuilder, of course. He got it from years of working hard, and his body does show a bit of strain. Ray is Caucasian, and of Ukrainian and Russian descents. His skin is smooth and good looking, slightly tanned, but not without it's scars. Because of the way Ray lived his life, he got plenty of scars from fights and other precarious situations. His body is covered in scars under all that clothing. He has quite a large one on his arm, it appears like a slashing scar. Starting at the base of his shoulder going down to his elbow. He also has a another small slashing scar over his eye. Because I just can't resist giving my characters facial scars! Other than that, Ray has a few moles and here and there. Ray can be called good-looking, his handsomeness is more of the rough variety, if you catch my drift. Ray's head is average sized and heart shaped. Ray's face is squared and his facial features are pronounced and well defined. He has a sharp/strong jawline. The most defined part of his face is his average-sized chin, that sticks out a little bit. He has a large nose, with a long bridge and wide, round, nostrils. His eyes are small, and have a beautiful blue color, which are a bit smaller than the rest of his face. They are always seemingly concealed under his sunglasses. His forehead is wide, but other than that, not too big. Ray always has a blank or aggressive face on. Ray's hair is black colored and neatly slicked back. He has a bit of facial hair growing, a beard is coming in fast, right now it's a stubble. Ray has a tough-guy style, and dresses heavily, but he'll will wear just about anything. From hoodies, to polo-shirts, to jeans, he isn't picky when it comes to style. His favorite color is black, so he tends to wear outfits of darker colors. Sometimes he'll wear hats, like baseball caps. He's always seen wearing sunglasses. Any kind of sunglasses really. His favorite kind is his Oil-Rig Sunglasses ( They look like this). Which are either over his eyes, or hanging off around his neck (At night). Ray also likes to wear gloves too. Mostly finger-less gloves. Personality: Ray gives people mixed signals when they're around him. For starters, Ray appears as the stoic, gruff kind of person that rarely shows any emotion. Ray prefers doing work, opposed to social situations. Because work/business is where he's really at home. He tries to be nice most of the time, except in his own rough way. He can be rude sometimes and cross lines, unintentionally, though. He knows when he crosses the lines and feels a bit of guilt as a result. Ray isn't too good at apologies, and tends to get himself in worse situations, which is why he rarely apologizes. Instead, he'll try to improve and not do it again - Because that's better than apologizing! Ray can come off as a bit of an @ss sometimes. He's quick to get annoyed and aggravated, and oh boy, it will show. He'll usually express his irritation in some way. Ray is a person who's overwhelmingly adamant and stubborn. He'll fight/argue for what he believes in. Ray is also the kind of person who doesn't give any f*cks about what people think of him. He does what he wants to, d*mn what people may think. Speaking of which, Ray prefers to do things by himself. He just prefers going alone because he won't have anyone to worry about but himself. But, if it calls for it, Ray will work with just about anyone as long as they don't piss him off/aren't useless. Despite all of this, Ray is a very moral person. He can be classified under "good guy." He'll help the people that he believes needs helping, and will fight the people he thinks needs fighting (Mostly people that pick fights with him). As you may have guessed by now, Ray is not above getting dirty when the situation calls for it. Ray is straight, but is as far from romantic as anyone gets. He's just not that interested in romance, and it takes a lot of effort to even get him slightly interested. Which means that he's heavily resistant to good looking ladies - Especially those who use it to take advantage of horny young boys. Favorite activities/hobbies:As stated above, Ray is an "all work" kind of person. Who prefers work to fun. There are, however, a few things that Ray likes to do/is good at. Ray likes martial arts, specifically karate. He's an orange belt, but he's far more experienced than trained. In a way, you could say that he was trained through experience. He can fist fight quite well . Other than that, Ray likes baseball, and is good at that too. He mostly likes to watch it more than anything though. Favorite object:
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| | | Maxx Cosmic Wanderer
Posts : 3527 Join date : 2012-10-21 Age : 27 Location : The Moon
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Tue Oct 29, 2013 11:17 pm | |
| Okay, Emma, here's the deal. Everyone thinks that Waldo is OP. So, you need to add another weakness. I was thinking that Waldo could only use someone else's powers on the person they belong to (you can't use Eli's powers on Rush, for example) and the person has to be in the presence of Waldo for her to use their power.
Both accepted Al. When you get a chance would you mind setting up the character section for me like you said you would? | |
| | | Mr Allen J Artist out of Work
Posts : 2321 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Tue Oct 29, 2013 11:53 pm | |
| Excellent. Can't wait to use Rush and Ray. They should be well known on the streets, mostly Rush. Without revealing too much about his power, Rush is very, very good with electronics and offers his services for money. Which could make some character interactions. And indexerized all the characters. - Spoiler:
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| | | True Night Killer
Posts : 1280 Join date : 2013-06-29 Location : Everywhere and nowhere.
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 12:00 am | |
| You missed one of your own, Victor. | |
| | | Mr Allen J Artist out of Work
Posts : 2321 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 12:07 am | |
| You weren't in the chat when I said this; but I decided not to use Vito. | |
| | | True Night Killer
Posts : 1280 Join date : 2013-06-29 Location : Everywhere and nowhere.
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 12:11 am | |
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| | | God-Mod Shadecaster
Posts : 543 Join date : 2012-10-21 Age : 27 Location : Azulu
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 12:11 am | |
| - Maxx wrote:
Okay, Emma, here's the deal. Everyone thinks that Waldo is OP. So, you need to add another weakness. I was thinking that Waldo could only use someone else's powers on the person they belong to (you can't use Eli's powers on Rush, for example) and the person has to be in the presence of Waldo for her to use their power.
I had a 2 fecking pages of text written addressing that. Which, I'll simply make into an optional pop-up at this point. In the pop up it states in non so few words that those suggested weakness were inferred in the character sheet already. I added the camera feed thing merely because it makes the power more scientific. But I'll get rid of that if it bothers anyone. - Optional rant:
- True Night wrote:
What happens if you use your evolved skills on somebody other than the owner? There's already some powers that have no business being boosted permanently, then Waldo and the original user could use them to greater effect on everyone else. Other than that it doesn't make sense that Waldo can walk along mimic somebody and then do something they've done for years better than them so soon just because she smart. Considering she doesn't have enhanced intelligence or something it sounds like she's simply superior. Knowledge helps, but I'd argue that practice is much more important. As stated in the sheet, Waldo cannot mimic someone unless she is looking at them. And she'd have a really hard time looking at them if she's fighting another person. So, if she was blind folded she wouldn't be able to mimic anyone. And, I never said she could be more powerful than the other person. She would be limited in that regard in the exact same ways as her combatant, in fact, if it would make people feel better I could change her power so that whatever happens to the person she's fighting also happens to her (either while she's in mimic mode or immediately after) so killing them would be self destructive. Also, enhanced intelligence would be absurd, because as with all my characters, I write at my own intelligence level - Tangent:
(as do all writers unless you like doing an impractical amount of research for just a one paragraph post, which, I've never seen any roll player do, and I certainly don't have time for that as I've got 6 collage classes I have to keep up with as well as this, plant sales, art commissions, fencing and my own experiments in my free time thus leaving me with 15 minutes a day in which to get any of my own writing done.)
which I can hardly say is 'enhanced' or in need of a label to justify it, which is all that ever is in fictional settings as no one really has the time or patience to attempt to write above their intelligence level. The only thing that people change when writing their characters is the amount of social filters they use. I personally think social filters are overrated so any ones I do have in reality are gone on pretty much all my characters. But anyway, that's besides the point. I actually got the whole mimic concept from my preferred strategy in fencing, which is to let my opponent attack one or twice, build a mental map of what all their tells, habits and preferences are then just as they start to attack again, launch at them with the exact same sort of attack they'd been using on you which works really well because people use that kind of attack because it gives them some kind of advantage over all the competitors of their skill level, and if that's the case odds are they've never had it used against them. And, if you have any experience in the sport, you'd know that once you get to the level where you have to drive from Missouri to Amarillo Texas to find a challenging tournament, EVERYONE is as fast as you are. EVERYONE is as powerful as you are and EVERYONE can match or exceed your endurance level. So the only thing that will get you any wins is how well you can read your opponent. And that's personally what I love about the sport, there is no strongest guy in the room. A lot of times there's not even the smartest as there's going to almost always be a tie for that. So, in order to win anything, you have to be able to know that 83% of people you face look at where they want to attack for about 1.5 seconds before attacking with a second intention aimed, usually to the left of their desired target if you're left handed and the opposite if you're right handed. You also have to know that everyone rotates their hand slightly in opposite direction of where they intend to attack 2 or more seconds before they even start to move forward. There's also a trick that allows you to see how far someone is going to lunge you can do by watching your attackers back foot and how far their heel is rolled inwards before they attack. However, since most of the people here do not fence, I'll not bore you with anymore of that unless someone asks for it. I guess my point is that I personally can't stand the dullness of using physical superiority to beat someone, so even if fiction I will never resort to that. When I say better, I never mean physically more powerful. Rather that the attack would be executed more intelligently. The amount of energy drain it would have on the original character if they did it would still apply to Waldo, as would all the original characters weaknesses. And as those would change from character to character, so would what would be most tactically effective. In the original character sheet, the example I gave of Fred assumed that controlling the shape of the fire wasn't a problem. Rather the amount of energy generated. So, while Fred would summon a wall of fire, because it was likely the first thing he thought of or an instinctive reaction, Waldo would create a tiny compressed ball of fire of the same energy level because it would be the most intelligent option. Fred in the example, could have done the same thing, but he simply didn't think of that. So only the methodology changes. Not the power or the weakness. However, I do see your point in that its like copying something that took years of training to master, which is a bit unfair. But by comparison to what I've seen as other characters powers this takes a whole lot less suspension of disbelief and is the only thing that will be required to use the words 'supernatural power' for as the rest I can always rely on science for. But, in the interest of the fairness within the game I am open to suggestions on flaws and weaknesses to balance the scale, as flaws are what make a character interesting and power is what makes them boring.
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| | | True Night Killer
Posts : 1280 Join date : 2013-06-29 Location : Everywhere and nowhere.
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 12:48 am | |
| The problem was allot of the things you said weren't very clear. In the weaknesses it says she can't mimic somebody if they're not in her line of sight, it doesn't say that they have to stay in her line of sight. That right there is makes it okay with me. I don't care about copying the power, but suggesting that Waldo can do it more efficient is unlikely in some cases. Anyways you should show that you can be creative with other people's powers IC instead of saying in in your sheet.
EDIT: After talking in chat I think it's fine. | |
| | | The Real Shade Jehovah's Thickness
Posts : 582 Join date : 2012-12-02
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 3:14 am | |
| Might have to start color coding all the different demons, which might be a little problematic for me.
Also, since everybody here is basically in every RP, my apologies for slow posting, I might have to drop an RP to balance frequent posts and schoolwork (and the constant demands of my harem). | |
| | | True Night Killer
Posts : 1280 Join date : 2013-06-29 Location : Everywhere and nowhere.
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 3:41 am | |
| Darn, that's too bad. I like all your characters. | |
| | | Celo "The Moms" Alien Ninja Frog Empress
Posts : 2136 Join date : 2013-06-29 Age : 27 Location : who knows
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 1:18 pm | |
| ..... I suck at character sheets
name: Breanna “Bre” Wallace
gender: female
age: 16
appearance: Bre is 5’5” and weighs 121 lbs. Overall, she is average in the weight department. She is rather well-formed for a female her age, and can be seen as somewhat attractive. She has a normal oval-shaped face with a normal sized nose, lips, eyes, et cetera. Bre is Caucasian American and has a slight tan, but it is only slight, meaning her skin still maintains to a certain degree a pale tint to it. There are freckles scattered all over her body. Bre has red eyes, which is something one can find interesting. Her hair is an orange color and is naturally curly, but Bre prefers to straighten it. When straitened, Bre’s hair extends a few inches past her shoulders.
Clothing wise, Bre dresses girly yet comfy. She usually wears a plain V-neck shirt that’s a bright color like yellow, orange, or light blue. She often times wears a white NorthFace jacket with it since it’s winter time. Bre almost always wears jeans- mostly the faded, boot-cut style of jeans. She prefers to wear the jeans tucked into a pair of dark brown boots that are made for cold weather. She also carries around a bag usually that holds a camera, sketchbook, a few pencils, and a cell phone. Lastly, the one thing you never catch Bre without (even in the winter time) is a pair of tinted sunglasses. The explanation for which shall be explained in power section.
Personality: Bre enjoys talking quite a bit. She does, however, seem unusual when conversing. She usually keeps eye contact with whoever is talking to her 100% of the time. She seems to want to look away at times, in fact, but can't. Bre has a few friends, though most people find her strange because of her constantly wearing sunglasses and yet always keeping eye contact. However, when someone speaks to her, Bre will quite willingly talk to that person. As for people already her friends, she is very protective of them. If one were to insult her friends, Bre has been known to throw insults right back. She doesn’t, however, speak up when someone insults her. She doesn’t care about insults directed at her, since she doesn’t let them get to her. (please excuse it for not having at least 7 lines- It was seven on word, at least! XO)
Favorite activities/hobbies: Bre is really good at different artsy things. She enjoys anything that ranges from photography to sketching to painting. She is also very good in these categories, as well. As for everything else, Bre is an “average” person. She is okay at sports and has a report card that ranges from A’s to C’s. Most of Bre’s aspirations are, thus, art-based. She plans on going to college and majoring in art because of her interest in the hobby. Bre doesn’t have many other interests aside from art though- as it is for any Meta human- the mention of other metas peaks her interest and she will listen intently.
favorite object:
power: Bre’s abilty is like a Medusa deal, only without the scales, snake hair, wings, talons, and any other gorgon trait I forgot about. Also without the stone part. Now, to clarify. Bre’s ability makes it to where anyone who makes eye contact with her will temporarily freeze (not turn into stone, only freeze) for about ten seconds. By this I mean the person will see everything going on, yet their joints and limbs will freeze, leaving them immobile for 10 seconds. *sigh* I suck at power descriptions, but I hope you get what I mean XO Here's a better way to describe it....
Paralysis. Bre's power allows her to temporarily stop the movement of whoever meets her gaze. It is not as complete like Medusa, as she is not able to turn people into stone, but to more "freeze" them. There, that's a good way to describe it XD
weakness: This is where Bre's sunglasses come in. She can't control who looks in her eyes, so she has no control on who she temporarily freezes. This being said, she wears sunglasses to try to prevent people looking at her eyes and getting temporarily frozen. Then there's also the fact that Bre can't control how long a person is frozen. If someone somehow makes eye contact with her, each time it's exactly ten seconds that the person is frozen. No more, no less.
Also, Bre has to maintain eye contact with whoever she's talking to, which makes it even harder to control her power. | |
| | | Lieo Willy Wonka
Posts : 754 Join date : 2012-11-06 Location : A WORLD OF HOT, A WORLD OF SOOT - THE WORLD OF INDUSTRY
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 2:03 pm | |
| Since when was this a thing that started and did stuff with people in it? Huh. | |
| | | Mr Allen J Artist out of Work
Posts : 2321 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Wed Oct 30, 2013 7:53 pm | |
| And boom. - More hawtlinks:
CeloBreGod-Mod/Consultant TimelordWaldo I'm going to post as Rush/Ray later on today, then work on my last character. | |
| | | Mr Allen J Artist out of Work
Posts : 2321 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:18 am | |
| God, I love writing as Ray/Rush already. =P
I aged them up by a year if that's okay. Rush is now 20 and Rush is now 18. Since it makes more sense tbh. | |
| | | Maxx Cosmic Wanderer
Posts : 3527 Join date : 2012-10-21 Age : 27 Location : The Moon
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:18 am | |
| I'm working on a post peeps. | |
| | | Dragonbud Punk Rock
Posts : 849 Join date : 2013-06-26 Age : 26 Location : Owning and operating the brothel
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 12:41 am | |
| I'll probs wait to post, seeing how everyone is in one spot | |
| | | The Stalker of Shadows Rough AI
Posts : 1609 Join date : 2012-10-30 Age : 32 Location : In the abyss
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 1:12 am | |
| Lol. I saw the title of this things IC thread ans had to do a double take. I thought A thread was named for me for a second. | |
| | | Maxx Cosmic Wanderer
Posts : 3527 Join date : 2012-10-21 Age : 27 Location : The Moon
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 1:17 am | |
| There's a stalker in the shadows, not a stalker of the shadows. | |
| | | Celo "The Moms" Alien Ninja Frog Empress
Posts : 2136 Join date : 2013-06-29 Age : 27 Location : who knows
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 1:31 am | |
| So my sheet's... accepted? | |
| | | Maxx Cosmic Wanderer
Posts : 3527 Join date : 2012-10-21 Age : 27 Location : The Moon
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 1:46 am | |
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| | | Celo "The Moms" Alien Ninja Frog Empress
Posts : 2136 Join date : 2013-06-29 Age : 27 Location : who knows
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 2:09 am | |
| Yes I did XD previous page | |
| | | Maxx Cosmic Wanderer
Posts : 3527 Join date : 2012-10-21 Age : 27 Location : The Moon
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 3:01 am | |
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| | | Celo "The Moms" Alien Ninja Frog Empress
Posts : 2136 Join date : 2013-06-29 Age : 27 Location : who knows
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 3:06 am | |
| Great thanks a ton :3 I'll hopefully have an opening post up tomorrow morning. | |
| | | True Night Killer
Posts : 1280 Join date : 2013-06-29 Location : Everywhere and nowhere.
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Thu Oct 31, 2013 3:44 am | |
| I'm going to make one last character, and get in a post. Not sure in which order though. | |
| | | Mr Allen J Artist out of Work
Posts : 2321 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: The Freaks OOC Fri Nov 01, 2013 8:43 pm | |
| Since I couldn't resist, I made another Valos. This will be my last character made for this RP for now.
Name: Veronica Mia of the Valos Lineage
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Appearance: Veronica has a vibe that is a mixture of the nerd-vibe and the librarian-vibe. Maybe it's the oval glasses she wears, the freckles, or her demeanor in general. She certainly looks like a cliche intellectual gal. Veronica stands tall at 5'10 and weighs 159 pounds. She's very thin, and doesn't have not an ounce of fat visible on her being. She has an athletic build, and her shoulders are quite broad. Nothing major. She has muscles on her being. The most muscles she has is on her legs. Indicating that she is a runner at most. She has a very curvy figure. Veronica is of Brazilian origins. Her skin is a brown, smooth, light caramel color. Her skin is mostly clear aside from her various scars. Many will notice her heavily scarred knees. These scars stem from sports related injuries and falling. Her legs are also fairly scarred below the knee. Other than that, she's pretty clear. Veronica has a few tattoos on her, very recent, they're hidden by her attire. The first tattoo she has is on her shoulder of a Cross with angel wings, made with black ink. Underneath this "Veronica - Made in heaven" is written. Veronica has a small, diamond shaped head. Her head looks a little smaller than it should, and only the truly observant will pick up on it. Her forehead is quite small, easily covered up by her hair. Veronica's facial features are sharp and well-defined. She has a large, pointy chin, with her chin easily being the most notable part of her head/face. Her jawline is very strong and sharp. Her nose is small in terms of size, and points forward a bit. Her nose is triangle shaped (so are her nostrils) and she has sort of a long nose bridge. Veronica's lips are thick and full, they're a light pink color and she usually has them poking out. She has quite large and radiant eyes. Her eyes are generally round and her iris are quite beady. Her eyes are hazel colored. She has light-brown freckles plastered all over her face. Veronica's hair is an unnatural jet-black color. Her hair is very well-kept and good looking, and it's wavy/curly. Veronica keeps it in a shag-hairstyle, with plenty of the hair brushed over to the side. She brushes this hair over her forehead. Veronica's hair is kept at chin-length.
Going with the theme I was running, Veronica dresses very modestly. She keeps plenty of skin covered up. Some may also say that she dresses blandly. She'll mostly be seen wearing long-skirts that go long past her knees. There are times where Veronica can be seen wearing various kinds of pants. Veronica will wear just about any outfit combination. Button-up shirts, dress shirts, sweaters, jackets/coats, , etc. As long as she thinks it looks somewhat good on her. Since she's short-sighted, she needs to wear glasses. Veronica wears large oval-shaped, black framed glasses. That contribute to her nerdy look.
Personality: Don't feel like writing this right now. But, I'm certain on what her mindset is and I'll definitely do write this later.
Favorite activities/hobbies: Veronica likes to do a lot of things that she's good at. For starters, Veronica likes to play some sports, as mentioned in her appearance. Specifically she plays lots of Basketball and is pretty good at it. She has played other sports, but isn't as good at them as she is at basketball. She is an adventurer at heart. She's quite agile and good on her feet. She's no batman, but she's pretty good at climbing up stuff too. Trees and stuff are her specialty. She's an artist too, the most used skill for a character to have! Give her a paint brush, and she'll paint you a picture. She is no Leonardo da Vinci, but she's quite experienced and good at drawing. Veronica also likes to read various books. If there's any book that interests her, then she'll read it.
Favorite object:
Power: -Classified- But I most note that she's totally immune to all mind powers. Just so we don't get into any problems later. | |
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