Dawn of the Cyborgs OOC/ Closed

Name: Threx

Age: 40 (appears 30)

Gender: male

Species: cyborg (originally an unknown alien species)

Appearance: Threx stands 6’ 10” with silver-grey skin, due to being a cyborg. His arms and legs are thick and well-muscled. His hands and feet are clawed, and he has sharp teeth. His head looks like that of a dinosaur that has been flattened, giving him a more human appearance, and his eyes are more forward facing than a dinosaur’s. He has digitigrade legs, and each foot has 3 toes, two forward and one back. His eyes are normally all black, but glow green in the dark.
He wears basic utility clothing consisting of a dark grey shirt that covers his torso, and is sleeveless, as well as black pants which stop at his knees.

Personality: Threx is ruthless and thorough, especially when it comes to his job. He is somewhat of a loner, staying distant from others, tending not to make friends on purpose so as to limit people that can be used against him. This does not mean that he is not willing to work with others if necessary, but he often prefers to work alone. Being a bounty hunter, he is not really loyal to anyone except the highest bidder for his services, and even they are only an ally until they have paid him.

History/backstory: Threx was raised by his father, since his mother died when he was young. His father was hired muscle for those who needed a bodyguard, and he ended up teaching Threx everything he knew. Unfortunately, one of his enemies broke into their home when Threx was 15 years old and killed his father. As the killer stood over his father’s body, Threx snuck up behind him and stabbed him in the back, killing him. He used his father’s savings to equip himself and ended up going after a minor criminal with a bounty on his head, who he was able to capture and bring in. Thus his career of bounty hunting began. But he was in for another curveball….
Naturally his trade made him some enemies, and on a joint mission he was the victim of a bomb that had been planted. He was injured but alive. He completed the mission and collected the money. This event disturbed him however, so he began using the money from his bounties to give himself a less mortal body. After plenty of money spent and a long surgical process, he awoke as a cyborg.

Abilities: Threx is a cyborg, which gives him multiple abilities. His body is composed of super-compressed boron nitride nanotube sheets, which allows his outer layer to withstand 8,540 degree Fahrenheit temperatures as well as being extremely durable, nonmagnetic, as well an electrical insulator (he’s EMP hardened). The armor is coupled with energy shielding to protect him from harm. His has passive detection in the visible, infrared, and ultraviolet spectrums, and active/passive microwave and gamma ray detection, which allows him see close by objects on the other sides of walls. His eyes can zoom in and take pictures. His also has very sensitive olfactory and audio sensors. Inside of his hands and feet are powerful electromagnets which allow him to climb certain surfaces. He utilizes a combination of synthetic muscle fibers and hydraulics which allow him to punch through walls and lift 7,069 pounds and running up to 50 mph. He is powered by an internal fusion reactor with a chemical separator. His brain is coupled with quantum computer parts to allow him greater processing capabilities and to handle his body. He has an internal internet connection.
He has hidden pulse particle beam cannons and extendable micro-vibration blades composed of the same material as the rest of his body on each wrist. Hidden in one forearm is a grappling line.


Skills: His cyborg nature makes him a crack shot, as well as being excellent in hand to hand combat. He is also good at hacking and fixing/building things.

Weaknesses: Should his head be destroyed, he would die since it contains his brain. He cannot heal and must repair himself manually.

Weapons: a railgun rifle and whatever else he can get his hands on

Home: a small apartment under a false name in the Gamma district. It has a small portable chemical/nuclear converter that can make parts similar to a 3D printer, although nothing too big.

Job: bounty hunter, which pays pretty good money (this is complimented by the fact he doesn’t live very large).

other: bio

Forgive me night, but it seems as if your sheet contradicts itself. You say she can survive a nuclear blast and then you say that she cannot survive a nuclear blast (plus we won't be dropping nukes anytime soon so making your character strong enough to survive the blast of one is kind of OP).

Hmm I'm tempted to make a scientist or mechanic like character. Maybe one who specializes in cybernetics. Omg I have an idea but I'm gonna have to ask to make sure it's okay before I make a sheet.

1) Emma, I don't want this turning into another science argument thread like Defenders did. people really did not like it when that happened. Please do not do that.

2) That's Dragonbud, not Celo

and...

3) If you want to know whether a character idea will be accepted DB, just pm me.

Oh I just sent it to God-Mod but I can send it to you as well if you want.

I'm the one accepting the sheets, am I not?

Speaking of accepting sheets, is Kirrim accepted yet?

Yeah I guess, he just told me to send it to him. Hold on a minute I'll send it to you. Sorry if it sounds confusing.

ThePrussianCompy wrote:

Speaking of accepting sheets, is Kirrim accepted yet?

Prussia, you need to expound more upon Kirrim's powers. You didn't list how strong, fast, or durable he is and you didn't list what his bionics can do.

I already added in the parts that explain that Kimir's bionics do nothing really special; he actually needs them to function properly. As for those other things, I'll get right on it.

Alright, but remember that almost everyone else in the rp (save Agatha) has some sort of bionic adaptation that makes them superior to normal beings. You might be at a bit of a disadvantage if you don't have any sort of ability (besides being a cold-blooded lizard able to survive subzero temperatures that the city will never reach since its temperature is artificial.

Also Night, I think hard light weaponry is a bit too advanced for this rp. The other weapons are fine, but I think that's a bit extreme.

Well, I did what you asked, but knowing me, there's probably at least one other thing that it problematic.

ThePrussianCompy wrote:

Name: Kimir

Age: 42

Gender: Male (Binokalians are usually genderless, though they can change their gender to male or female at will. So, if he wants, he can turn into a female)

Species: Binokalian (Kimir has a bionic tail, as well as a bionic left eye)

Appearance: Binokalians look a bit like two-legged Komodo dragons. Their average height is about 7 feet tall (Kimir is 6' 11"), and their average weight is about 200 pounds (Kimir is 213, thanks in part to the bionics). The head is a foot long, and half a foot thick, and has two long, bony ridges on the sides. Their eyes are naturally an amber color. Their tail is around five feet long (Kimir's is actually half a foot longer). Their skin is smooth, but wrinkled around the base of the tail, the neck, and other joints int he body. The skin color is never consistand around the head and neck. Much like a chamelion, Binokalians can change their skin color, but only around the head and neck. The rest of the skin is usually either pistacio green or dark green (Kimir's skin is dark green.) They have four fingers, and two opposable digits on each hand. Their feet are very dinosaur-like, and don't allow much room for shoes.

Kimir's eyes are amber, but the cybernetic eye is a shade of dark blue.

Kimir's clothes are purple and lavender robes. He doesn't wear shoes or any footear.

Personality: Kimir is very awkward. There are not very many Binokalians in Port Argis, and he has tried to blend in with the crowd. He has a very odd sense of humor (e.g. trying to crack a joke after someone hurt themselves) that is not very uncommon in Binokalian society. He has a low ego, and doesn't have many friends. In danger, He mans up and uses the skills he was taught to either escape or fight off the threat.

History/backstory: Kimir was born on the Binokalian-owned planet of Dyur. He was born with a deformed tail, and it had to be amputated. Normally, he would have been a lost cause, but with the invention of bionics, Kimir's life was able to be saved. He was trained by his parents and village elders on how to hunt, fight, and survive. When he was 17, he and his parents hitched a ride on a spaceship and rode to Port Argis. He attempted to fit into this strange new society, but was always very awkward and ended up not making many friends. At the age of 19, he started working as a trader and bought his own house. He started visiting planets to collect rares and valuables in order to make a living selling them at Toron Station. Even though he is socially awkward, he still convinces many to buy his products.

Powers/skills: Kimir is excellent at exploring and fighting, which is why he visits strange, far-off planets so much. He has fought off wild animals, survived a night in tempratures below zero, and negotiated with native tribes.

Kimir is fairly athletic for his kind, and can sprint quickly (~18mph) for 13 at most. He can jog for much longer; he can jog for about a mile before tiring. His arm strength doesn't seem to live up to his bionic tail; he can lift about as much as the average human, for about as long as the average human.

His bionic eye takes the place of an organic eye that was rendered useless in a fight during his travels. To Kirim, the bionic eye is a sign of a mistake that he had made, and doesn't like it in the slightest.

Kimir isn't fond of his bionic tail, either, but it actually does have some advantages. First of all, it's prehensile, and a lot more flexible than a Binokalian organic tail. It is also able to carry very heavy things up to 700 pounds, with some strain.

Weaknesses: Kimir can sometimes bite off more than he can chew. Once, while stealing an artifact from a tribe, he foolishly decided to stop running and fight them off. He might have been killed has an accomplice not jumped in to save him. His cybernetics can occasionally glitch, which may cause his bionic eye to stop working or cause his bionic tail to make him lose balance. However, these glitches are rare; he has spent a lot of money to make sure that they're in working order.

Weapons:
-A pulse rifle. For ammunition, it doesn't rely on physical bullets. It instead relies on energy. The energy is a bit like a bundle of electricity, which has the ability to either stun the target or kill them, depending on where it is aimed. It is a type of laser weapon. The weapon itself isn't very accurate.
-A small, handheld railgun
-A rarely-used machete
-A "Flashstaff," Used by the Binokalians as a flashlight, a spear, and a staff. It is six feet long.

Home: Kimir lives in a small home at the edge fo the Zeta district. His home is small and wedged in between larger buildings, but the inside reveals that he makes plenty of money off of his job.

Job: Kimir is a trader that sells merchendise in Toron Station, though, occasionally, he'd sell items at the basketball stadium. Kimir usually either purchases his merchendise, or takes it himself from a far-off planet.

other: Biiiiooooo

Huff I am going to butcher this power/weapon/skill section.

It is a type of laser.

@Prussia: Dude, Kimir isn't going to survive this rp if he's that weak. It's a good idea for a character but he needs to have something more than human strength and below-average speed. Also, that flash staff sounds like hard light, which I already mentioned is probably a type of technology that is a little too advanced. For right now I'm not accepting Kimir because he's not strong enough. Look at the other character here prussia. Jenny's character can survive a nuclear flash and Shen can take apart technology with his mind.

Here's a good example. I made a character back in The Game called Flaeron. He looked very similar to your character (though he was a humanoid croc as opposed to a humanoid komodo dragon) and had bulletproof skin, superhuman reflexes, bones reinforced with carbon nanotubes, highly acidic blood (meaning that projectiles literally dissolved when they entered him) and could spit acid. By all means be original, but a character with human strength and below-average speed won't last very long at all in this rp, especially if he makes a name for himself (which Kimir sounds like he will).

Before I take a step further, tell me EVERYTHING that needs to be changed, please. You seem to be giving me bits and peices of information, and only after I've made an edit. I appreciate your advice.

Everything that needs to be changed? The only thing that needs to be changed is that Kimir needs an actual power. Being as strong as a human and below-average in the speed department isn't going to get you far at all in this RP.